The Introduction and Evolution of The Perception of Mr. Darcy

My biggest issue was my language choice, plain and simple is the way to go. My paper would have also benefitted from an extra revision or two as there weren't many issues with organization of ideas but everything could have flowed more smoothly. The ideas I brought up were well fleshed out and followed a clear path but needed more pointed of an introduction. The more I would have relied on my ideas and the less on the structure and diction, the better my paper would have been. I needed to develop my quotes a little better as well as they were not 100% necessary and didn't add all that much to the work. Overall I think a few more periods of revision and a look-over from a different pair of eyes will help my work reach it's potential.