Wednesday, September 15, 2010
E for Eunice
By far the strongest the D for Danforth, E for Eunice, and F for Foxglove was E for Eunice. E for Eunice was strong from the introduction on. Both Danforth and Foxglove used specific examples and had weak structure in their introductory paragrahs. Danforth's claim is not particularly controversial and Foxglove's is the definition of character development. Eunice also uses quotations most effectively and again, doesn't simply restate. Eunice works because it was also very pointed and I could expect what was going to come while still wanting to read on. The sentence structure was also the most varied of the three. Grammatically and substantiviely it was the strongest
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