Hamlet Essay Comments

My biggest issue was my synthesis paragraph. I felt my analysis of speech patterns of both aspects of Claudius' life were complete and effective in illuminating his character but never really went in-depth into my explanation of how this difference in character affects his influence. I needed to spend more time on the conclusion to help bring it all together and it almost feels like two seperate analysies. Perhaps had I left myself more time and reread my essay and come back with fresh eyes a day later, I would have been able to more effectively address my thesis.